Dear Readers.
I have received many complaints about various issues. I’ve received everything from comments, ratings, reviews and a big drop in views.
The first is about the writing, the spelling mistakes have annoyed many.
The second is the inconsistency in some parts of the story, the lack of development between some characters and the chapters [R-18] that were not convincing.
I’ve decided to put the novel on hold, I don’t know if I’ll do it again or if I’ll just do one or two chapters going back in time to fix the plot holes. Obviously this second one is rather forced, but it’s a lot less work and better than nothing.
This hiatus includes my other two novels, as they suffer from the same problems, though to a lesser extent.